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Ermilia’s Picture it & Write.

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Peter took in the scenery with much amazement. Things had really changed since his last visit. He swooped down from the clouds to get a closer look. His clothes of intricately woven leaves would not do. He had to blend in. Then he remembered that on one of his previous visits, he came across a home for lost boys just like his gang back home. Perhaps, he could get some clothes that looked like what everyone else was wearing. With much difficulty, he snooped around until he finally found the place. Yes! It was still a home for lost boys. All he had to do was to sneak in through a window and get some modern clothes. Within a couple of minutes, he was in and out, looking like a boy who belonged to this new age. With keen interest, he walked along the road and watched as people whisked by in automobiles that looked quite different than he last remembered. He walked by what looked like a window with an invisible wall showcasing stiff people wearing clothes like a spell had been cast on them. He saw many people in trains that looked longer and moved much faster. Several people walked past him without so much as a glance at him. Everyone and everything moved in a hurry. And the buildings were now much, much taller than he recalled. If only Tinkerbell was here to see this.

He would have loved to visit many places, but it was time to fulfill the reason why he came. He had to see her once more. He wondered if she or any of her brothers would remember him. It had been so long since their adventure and he had not come by since then. Despite how much things had changed, he knew exactly where the house was. With a leap and a bound, he was in the air again. As he approached the house, he felt excited. The little boy inside him wanted to play again, but he knew better than that. Regular people stopped playing as they grew older and she must be much older now.

All the windows were shut and the curtains drawn. This had never happened before. He usually swooped in through the children’s window each time he came. He was puzzled for a while until it occurred to him that these were people who couldn’t fly so they walked into their houses through the front door. He glided down gently in front of the house and knocked. An elderly man answered the door.

“Hello. Who are you?”

“My name is Peter. Is Wendy in, please?”

“Yes. How are you acquainted with her?”

“She’s an old friend.”

“An old friend? Boy, you’re hardly fourteen years old. How long has it been since you’ve known her?”

“I meant she’s a friend of my family,” Peter recovered quickly.

“Well, don’t just stand there. Come in. Wendy! There’s a boy looking for you!”

A wrinkled face greeted Peter with a smile.

“I wondered if I’d ever see you again, Peter”

“You remember!” he shouted with joy.

“How could I ever forget you? After all the adventures we had.”

“Wheeee!” Peter lifted off the carpet and sailed around the room.

“You can’t do that in here. Thomas doesn’t know anything about you or magic.”

“Who’s Thomas?”

“The man you met at the door. He’s my husband.”

“What’s a husband?”

“I’ll tell you all about it later.”

Later that day, Peter sat on a cloud while looking down at Wendy’s house. He thought about the long conversation he had had with her. She had told him about the interesting life she had lived in this world; about her brothers, her husband and her children. He wondered about may things – if they would have had a more bedazzling life if they had stayed with him to have more adventures, and if Wendy would ever visit him again; if he should have returned to live with Wendy after he defeated Hook; if he could have become her husband and if he would have looked as old as Thomas by now; if they would have had children of their own.

No! He would never trade his life in Neverland for any other.

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“Okay. Everyone know what they gotta do?”

“Yeah, Boss!”

“Umm. I got a question, Boss”

“What’s it, Bruno?”

“If there’re three guards and five of us, how come we don’t take ‘em all out?”

“You listening to anything I said? No contact with the fake popo! We get in and out clean.”

“But Boss, what if they make us out? Can we kill ‘em?”

“We’re gonna be wearing masks for Pete’s sake.”

“Okay. But let’s say we disabled the alarms and the cameras, but I gotta pee…”

“Shut up Bruno! You’re just like your old man. All brawns, no brains.”

WORD COUNT: 100

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Ermilia’s Picture it & Write.

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As Sam got to the fork in the road, he turned off his iPod, trying to remember if he had to take the right turn or the left. The signpost looked like it had been caught in a hurricane whilst being mauled by a bear. There was no way to read anything off the termite-infested wood at this point. Aunt Gloria had said something about wild flowers or a vineyard on the road to Back Turn Village, but he was playing Grand Theft Auto V at the time; with divided attention, he scribbled the directions on a napkin which was nowhere to be found.

It was a fifty-fifty chance he had to take. When in doubt, take the right turn, he thought to himself; after all, right is right. He breathed heavily as he laboured on his bicycle along the untarred road. Suddenly, he came across a sign with the inscription ‘NRUT KCAB’. The words were spray-painted and looked like an act of vandalism. Someone was trying to be funny. He continued for a about half a mile before he got to another sign that said ‘NRUT KCAB WON’. It was no different from the first. Another prank by kids, he thought.

It wasn’t long before he came to a cliff. He got off his bicycle, walked over to the edge and knelt down to see if the village was in sight. To his surprise, the road continued vertically downward for about five metres and then leveled up again at the bottom. He took out his camera to take a photograph of what he deemed a rather intriguing sight.

In a flash, he felt a force of some kind pulling him over the edge. He tried to stand up, but couldn’t. He tried crawling backwards on hands and knees, but that didn’t help either. It felt as if he was tethered to a post while someone gradually pulling on the rope. In one cataclysmic moment, he found himself falling to his death, but as he got closer to the bottom, it felt as if he was floating like a feather. Landing softly on the ground, he puffed in relief and lay there for a while, thanking God for what seemed like a miracle.

“Olleh!”

He looked up and saw an elderly man and woman standing comically upside down on the road, peering at him.

“I didn’t know the circus was in town,” Sam said, smiling at the overweight couple.

“Ew era ton sucric elpoep,” the man replied, smiling back. “Ew era raluger elpoep.”

“Come again? I don’t understand the language you are speaking. Do you speak English?”

Sam picked himself up from the ground and found himself looking at the couple face to face.

“Emoclew ot Yspot-Yvrut Egalliv,” the woman said grinning at Sam. “A ecalp fo on nruter. Uoy lliw reven og kcab emoh.”

“Tahw?” Sam exclaimed. Then he caught himself. That didn’t sound right. He meant to say ‘what’.

“Tahw?” he found himself saying again.

He started to panic when it suddenly occurred to him that he was also standing topsy-turvy.

Out of the brushes came more people, all walking awkwardly on both hands, each person beaming at Sam and saying “Olleh” and “Emoclew”.

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“What did you learn at Sunday School today?” Susan ruffled the four-year-old’s hair.

“The story about Jonah and the whale,” Jimmy replied.

“Tell me about it.”

“God told Jonah to go to Nevada and Jonah said no and went on a cruise ship, but he fell off the ship and a whale swallowed him. Then Superman came to rescue him. Superman told the whale to spit him out, but the whale said no. So Superman gave the whale a really good spanking and he spat Jonah out and Jonah changed his mind so Superman flew him to Nevada. The end.”

WORD COUNT: 100

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Life had always been about social propriety. Being the princess meant doing what she was told for the sake of her mother’s reputation; for the sake of the crown. Someday, she will be queen bee.

The law dictates she has to marry royalty, but she didn’t want to marry him.  He is a prince, wealthy and handsome, but she was already in love with another – a modest drone in the countryside. Marrying a commoner was not an option, yet she was adamant. She had already made up her mind. Even if it meant forgoing the crown for a commoner’s life.

WORD COUNT: 100

Friday Fictioneers is hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

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He could barely concentrate on what she was saying. Something about civil rights or being a paralegal and the case she was working on. All he could think about was how the night would end.

She couldn’t remember a word he had said in the restaurant. Something about stocks and bonds and the factors involved in risk management. She could only visualize the impending goodbye at her front door.

Now, here they are– fingers dovetailed, barely an inch separating them, lips closing in. Then music swirls, cupids circle, fireworks in the air – the whole shebang.  They are on cloud nine.

WORD COUNT: 100

Friday Fictioneers is a meme by Madison Woods

Now hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

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Three jingles of the bell was the signature tune for Daddy’s arrival from work. We’d all rush out to meet him, not necessarily because we hadn’t seen him all day long. It was the tasty treats in his bag we were racing for. And as was the norm, Daddy always had a surprise in there somewhere. Candy, chocolates, ice-cream, cookies… the list goes on.

Daddy’s gone now and even though I’m all grown up, I miss the sound of his bicycle. Every time I see one or hear its bell ring, my mind quickly goes back to those nostalgic moments.

WORD COUNT: 100

Friday Fictioneers is a meme by Madison Woods

Now hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

Ermilia’s Picture it & Write.

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The riot went on for days without ceasing. An angry mob, majority of whom were young men, had gathered in the town square, calling frantically for heads to roll. Out of youthful zeal and misguided fanaticism, some set shops and cars ablaze and destroyed public property worth millions with petrol bombs. The police were at their wits’ end and were completely outnumbered and ‘outgunned’.  It didn’t really matter to the public that the government was calling for calm. Even the journalists jeered at the Presidential Spokesperson when he held the press conference. The public’s dissatisfaction with the government had evidently overspilled its banks.

“They killed my father for no apparent reason,” wailed a protestor.

“My husband died and I didn’t even get to say goodbye,” said an elderly woman in tears.

“How could they shoot unarmed people?” an angry protestor chipped in.

The march towards the presidential palace had been peaceful. They were only armed with a petition to the head of state for fair wages. A police officer accidentally shot a canister of tear gas into the crowd. It was an honest mistake, but the tumult that followed called for more stringent measures. The crowd thought it was an overreaction from the police while the dispersing crowd was interpreted by the police as an incipient riot. That was when all hell broke loose. Rubber bullets were fired into the crowd, or at least that was the official statement the police released to the media. Then they sprayed pressurized water on the crowd. It took less than fifteen minutes for things to calm down, but by then eleven people were dead with close to a hundred injured.

Now a real riot has began with no end in sight. It seems the nation did not learn from the 1948 disturbances.

Elechi Amadi’s premier novel initiated me into the world of African Writers. I remember being so immersed in the story each time I picked up the book, I was oblivious to everything else.

In simple language, Amadi narrates the story of Ihuoma, the beauty of Omigwe, whose character and conduct are beyond reproach in Omokachi and all the neighbouring villages. Her near-perfect qualities make her a role model to her peers and the ideal wife for most men who wish to take one.

Yet her comeliness does not exempt her from the inevitable trials of life. Widowed too early in marriage for most women, she has to struggle against loneliness and the advances of men. Her equanimity in such trying moments makes the respect she commands soar even higher. But the price she pays to uphold her reputation seems to increase with passing time.

As her prestige mounted its maintenance became more trying. She became more sensitive to criticism and would go to any lengths to avoid it. The women adored her. Men were awestruck before her. She was becoming something of a phenomenon. But she alone knew her internal struggles. She knew she was not better than anyone else. She thought her virtues were the products of chance. As the days went by she began to loathe her so-called good manners. She became less delighted when people praised her. It was as if they were confining her to an ever-narrowing prison.

Amadi weaves a tale of beleaguered romance between Ihuoma and Ekwueme, her new suitor, in a society where every facet of human existence is governed by the mores of the people and the statutes of their gods.

Omokachi village life was known for its tradition, propriety and decorum. Excessive or fanatical feelings over anything were frowned upon and even described as crazy. Anyone who could not control his feelings was regarded as being unduly influenced by his agwu.

The author’s use of imagery, folklore and West African proverbs, interspersed with the occasional humor of witty Wodu Wakiri the Wag, makes The Concubine a mélange of spicy adages, anecdotes, allegories and amusement. His elaborate dissection of tribal customs makes this book not just another African novel, but an exposé on West African culture.

The plot flows from communal living and good-neighbourliness into a tributary of greed, jealousy, potions and encounters with the spirit world in an era when people had to wrestle with deities to secure their destiny.

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“Bleeeeet! This is where the humans bury their dead. They put the dead human in a long box and then stand around the deep hole in which they put the box. One human, dressed in black, stands on one side and speaks words from a book. They end by saying rest in peace and cover the box with dirt. I know this because I have been grazing on this land for dead humans all my life. After that, they go home, chop up my fellow livestock, cook them and eat them. They rest in peace, but we rest in pieces.”

 WORD COUNT: 100

Friday Fictioneers is a meme by Madison Woods

Now hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

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